Hi! I'm actively working on the next update, which will be released soon . To stay informed, you can follow me on X, Patreon, or itch.io, where I post regular development updates. I also share progress videos on my YouTube channel here: https://www.youtube.com/@MaiDZ-ll9gu, and in my patreon (for the update information it's free you don't need to pay) : https://www.patreon.com/Maidz and I plan to show even more soon!
This next update will include free additions like alternate nsfw scene , story , inventory, and an new RPG combat system on itch.io. However, all new content will be available through my Patreon, where supporters get exclusive early access. Thanks for your interest and support i hope you liked the game ^^!
A very cute game. The artstyle took some time to grow on me. It must have been the characters' proportions, but I wasn't a fan initially, even if I'm glad to see a more unique artstyle when most VNs nowadays look like carbon copies of each other.
My only complaint is that the romance takes quite a while to really kick off. It's obvious from the start that the main characters have the hots for each other, but the beginning of the story kind of drags on. There's a strange choice of sound effects during dialogue, that sometimes emphasizes the wrong sentences, like that wierd hit sound when characters talk from time to time. There's also a very brief gameplay sequence thrown in there, where the game tries to be an RPG-like turn-based combat system, but in my opinion, it's very unecessary and pretty worthless. I think the dev should rather remove it and focus exclusively on the romance in a traditional VN format.
But once you get to the sequence in the tavern, it's really good until the very end. I really like Mouton and Ours, and the theme the story conveys through them, like "You only make bad decisions in life once you stop endorsing them", and "don't dwell on the past, be happy with what you have and what you experienced in life". From that point on, the romance between Ajestremia and the MC becomes pretty sweet, and you can really feel the passion between these two characters. It's short-lived, and would have benefitted from a longer duration to flesh things out even more, but it's credible and it works. And the sex scene is really well-drawn, managing to be both cute and alluring at the same time.
Give it a shot, people. It's short, but it's good.
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Un jeu très mignon. Il m'a fallu un moment pour me faire au style graphique, je pense que c'était dû aux proportions des personnages. Je le trouve pas mauvais, bien au contraire, je suis content de voir un style plus unique dans un domaine où tous les jeux adultes sont des exactes copies sans saveur les uns des autres.
Le seul vrai problème que j'ai trouvé au jeu, c'est que la romance met un peu de temps à se lancer. On comprend dès le départ que les deux protagonistes se plaisent l'un et l'autre, mais le début de l'histoire traîne un peu, avec des répliques redondantes et un choix étrange d'effes sonores qui accentuent les mauvaises répliques, comme ce buit bizarre que quelqu'un qui se fait taper dessus. Rien de dérangeant, juste un peu étrange.
Il y a aussi une implémentation basique d'un système de combat en tour par tour, mais personnellement, je trouve qu'il n'apporte rien à l'histoire. L'enlever et partir sur un roman visuel plus traditionnel permettrait de se focaliser pleinement sur la romance sans distractions qui pourraient nuire à l'expérience globale.
Mais une fois que l'histoire atteint le passage de la taverne, elle devient vraiment bonne. J'aime bien Mouton et Ours, et le message qui est transmis à travers eux, du genre "Les seules mauvaises décisions de ta vie sont celles que tu n'assumes pas", ou "ne sois pas fixé sur le passé, sois content de ce que tu as et ce que la vie t'a appris". Et c'est après ce passage que la romance devient vraiment bonne, où on sent vraiment la passion entre les deux protagonistes. Ca reste assez bref, et a aurait mérité un peu plus de temps pour travailler un peu plus leur relation, mais c'est crédible et ça fonctionne. Et la scène adult est vraiment bien dessinée, elle est colorée et mignonne tout en restant excitante à regarder.
Moi, je suis convaincu par ce premier chapitre, un peu court mais solide, à voir comment les suivants se porteront.
Currently it’s a demo and I want to explore some other possibilities of romance, so basically this first episode is a classic romance. But with time and with the different characters that will be included, I will update the tag I guess !
There is some dialogue and events that are different and you can control the will of the character at some points.
Having « Full » control of the character is something that I want for this project in the future, and I tried to do different choices that lead to different stories. Like for example considering Ajestremia as a love interest or not for the player, and this only choice changes a lot of dialogue and even the conclusion of the demo, if you don’t want to have a romance cutscene with her.
I also want the player to be able to customize their character for the sequel, so you can have a better feeling about the « Full control of the Mc ».
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Hi! I'm actively working on the next update, which will be released soon . To stay informed, you can follow me on X, Patreon, or itch.io, where I post regular development updates. I also share progress videos on my YouTube channel here: https://www.youtube.com/@MaiDZ-ll9gu, and in my patreon (for the update information it's free you don't need to pay) : https://www.patreon.com/Maidz and I plan to show even more soon!
This next update will include free additions like alternate nsfw scene , story , inventory, and an new RPG combat system on itch.io. However, all new content will be available through my Patreon, where supporters get exclusive early access. Thanks for your interest and support i hope you liked the game ^^!
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A very cute game. The artstyle took some time to grow on me. It must have been the characters' proportions, but I wasn't a fan initially, even if I'm glad to see a more unique artstyle when most VNs nowadays look like carbon copies of each other.
My only complaint is that the romance takes quite a while to really kick off. It's obvious from the start that the main characters have the hots for each other, but the beginning of the story kind of drags on. There's a strange choice of sound effects during dialogue, that sometimes emphasizes the wrong sentences, like that wierd hit sound when characters talk from time to time. There's also a very brief gameplay sequence thrown in there, where the game tries to be an RPG-like turn-based combat system, but in my opinion, it's very unecessary and pretty worthless. I think the dev should rather remove it and focus exclusively on the romance in a traditional VN format.
But once you get to the sequence in the tavern, it's really good until the very end. I really like Mouton and Ours, and the theme the story conveys through them, like "You only make bad decisions in life once you stop endorsing them", and "don't dwell on the past, be happy with what you have and what you experienced in life". From that point on, the romance between Ajestremia and the MC becomes pretty sweet, and you can really feel the passion between these two characters. It's short-lived, and would have benefitted from a longer duration to flesh things out even more, but it's credible and it works. And the sex scene is really well-drawn, managing to be both cute and alluring at the same time.
Give it a shot, people. It's short, but it's good.
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Un jeu très mignon. Il m'a fallu un moment pour me faire au style graphique, je pense que c'était dû aux proportions des personnages. Je le trouve pas mauvais, bien au contraire, je suis content de voir un style plus unique dans un domaine où tous les jeux adultes sont des exactes copies sans saveur les uns des autres.
Le seul vrai problème que j'ai trouvé au jeu, c'est que la romance met un peu de temps à se lancer. On comprend dès le départ que les deux protagonistes se plaisent l'un et l'autre, mais le début de l'histoire traîne un peu, avec des répliques redondantes et un choix étrange d'effes sonores qui accentuent les mauvaises répliques, comme ce buit bizarre que quelqu'un qui se fait taper dessus. Rien de dérangeant, juste un peu étrange.
Il y a aussi une implémentation basique d'un système de combat en tour par tour, mais personnellement, je trouve qu'il n'apporte rien à l'histoire. L'enlever et partir sur un roman visuel plus traditionnel permettrait de se focaliser pleinement sur la romance sans distractions qui pourraient nuire à l'expérience globale.
Mais une fois que l'histoire atteint le passage de la taverne, elle devient vraiment bonne. J'aime bien Mouton et Ours, et le message qui est transmis à travers eux, du genre "Les seules mauvaises décisions de ta vie sont celles que tu n'assumes pas", ou "ne sois pas fixé sur le passé, sois content de ce que tu as et ce que la vie t'a appris". Et c'est après ce passage que la romance devient vraiment bonne, où on sent vraiment la passion entre les deux protagonistes. Ca reste assez bref, et a aurait mérité un peu plus de temps pour travailler un peu plus leur relation, mais c'est crédible et ça fonctionne. Et la scène adult est vraiment bien dessinée, elle est colorée et mignonne tout en restant excitante à regarder.
Moi, je suis convaincu par ce premier chapitre, un peu court mais solide, à voir comment les suivants se porteront.
Hi ! Thank you for playing my game !
Ce commentaire a l’air d’être français donc je vais réponde en français x)
Tes remarques sont assez pertinente je te remercie de me les avoirs partagés !
C’est mon tout premier projet donc il a énormément de chose à améliorer et le système de combat en est une !
Hello! Can we chat in Discord?
Hi yes it’s maidz_05
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Hi dev, the art and models looks nice.
I would appreciate if you could say what kind of content/tags you have planned for the game?
Taking into account that you say that every decision has an impact, I suppose that means the player has full control of what the Mc does, right?
Good luck.
Hi and thank you for playing my game !
Currently it’s a demo and I want to explore some other possibilities of romance, so basically this first episode is a classic romance. But with time and with the different characters that will be included, I will update the tag I guess !
There is some dialogue and events that are different and you can control the will of the character at some points.
Having « Full » control of the character is something that I want for this project in the future, and I tried to do different choices that lead to different stories. Like for example considering Ajestremia as a love interest or not for the player, and this only choice changes a lot of dialogue and even the conclusion of the demo, if you don’t want to have a romance cutscene with her.
I also want the player to be able to customize their character for the sequel, so you can have a better feeling about the « Full control of the Mc ».
I hope I answered your question 😊