AJESTREMIA

I really love this game, excellent art style and interesting plot. 

I have recomentdations about battle scene for this and another future episodes. 

In my opinion, I think battle scene looks rough. It should have some effects such as when someone slash to another one, it should have slash effect to make it's realistic, or when someone get hit, that one should shivers and shows pain expression a second. 

Second, I think it will be good if you add some game mechanics for first battle such as when main character is slashed by 2 bandits and he lose 20 HP. Before he get  fight, you can add tutorial that teach us to use HP potion like main character thinks it will be better if he heal his HP before get battle and show tutorial that you can open your inventory and use HP potion to heal hims. I know that after he defeat 2 bandits, his HP will have only a few and he will dizzy. But if you want to add "How to use potion" tutorial, you can make those bandits make more little damage to you, to make his HP is low when finish a battle. For your future game contents, when he needs to confront to strong enemies, he can uses HP or other potions to support his fight ,because he already known how to use potion at first battle. 

Also, in your future game contents, you can make some shops that make main character buy or sell some weapons, potions or presents for his lovely Aje.

These things will make this game looks lively and more interesting. I hope you will read my comment and give a positive response to me

P.S. I am not good at English, so if I write somethings wrong, I need to apologize about that.

new update? 

EN/FR:

A very cute game. The artstyle took some time to grow on me. It must have been the characters' proportions, but I wasn't a fan initially, even if I'm glad to see a more unique artstyle when most VNs nowadays look like carbon copies of each other.

My only complaint is that the romance takes quite a while to really kick off. It's obvious from the start that the main characters have the hots for each other, but the beginning of the story kind of drags on. There's a strange choice of sound effects during dialogue, that sometimes emphasizes the wrong sentences, like that wierd hit sound when characters talk from time to time. There's also a very brief gameplay sequence thrown in there, where the game tries to be an RPG-like turn-based combat system, but in my opinion, it's very unecessary and pretty worthless. I think the dev should rather remove it and focus exclusively on the romance in a traditional VN format.

But once you get to the sequence in the tavern, it's really good until the very end. I really like Mouton and Ours, and the theme the story conveys through them, like "You only make bad decisions in life once you stop endorsing them", and "don't dwell on the past, be happy with what you have and what you experienced in life". From that point on, the romance between Ajestremia and the MC becomes pretty sweet, and you can really feel the passion between these two characters. It's short-lived, and would have benefitted from a longer duration to flesh things out even more, but it's credible and it works. And the sex scene is really well-drawn, managing to be both cute and alluring at the same time.

Give it a shot, people. It's short, but it's good.

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Un jeu très mignon. Il m'a fallu un moment pour me faire au style graphique, je pense que c'était dû aux proportions des personnages. Je le trouve pas mauvais, bien au contraire, je suis content de voir un style plus unique dans un domaine où tous les jeux adultes sont des exactes copies sans saveur les uns des autres.

Le seul vrai problème que j'ai trouvé au jeu, c'est que la romance met un peu de temps à se lancer. On comprend dès le départ que les deux protagonistes se plaisent l'un et l'autre,  mais le début de l'histoire traîne un peu, avec des répliques redondantes et un choix étrange d'effes sonores qui accentuent les mauvaises répliques, comme ce buit bizarre que quelqu'un qui se fait taper dessus. Rien de dérangeant, juste un peu étrange.

Il y a aussi une implémentation basique d'un système de combat en tour par tour, mais personnellement, je trouve qu'il n'apporte rien à l'histoire. L'enlever et partir sur un roman visuel plus traditionnel permettrait de se focaliser pleinement sur la romance sans distractions qui pourraient nuire à l'expérience globale.

Mais une fois que l'histoire atteint le passage de la taverne, elle devient vraiment bonne. J'aime bien Mouton et Ours, et le message qui est transmis à travers eux, du genre "Les seules mauvaises décisions de ta vie sont celles que tu n'assumes pas", ou "ne sois pas fixé sur le passé, sois content de ce que tu as et ce que la vie t'a appris". Et c'est après ce passage que la romance devient vraiment bonne, où on sent vraiment la passion entre les deux protagonistes. Ca reste assez bref, et a aurait mérité un peu plus de temps pour travailler un peu plus leur relation, mais c'est crédible et ça fonctionne. Et la scène adult est vraiment bien dessinée, elle est colorée et mignonne tout en restant excitante à regarder.

Moi, je suis convaincu par ce premier chapitre, un peu court mais solide, à voir comment les suivants se porteront.

Hello! Can we chat in Discord?

Hi dev, the art and models looks nice.
I would appreciate if you could say what kind of content/tags you have planned for the game?  

Taking into account that you say that every decision has an impact, I suppose that means the player has full control of what the Mc does, right? 

Good luck.